Originally Posted by Steven August Rieck
Mike this is a great idea.
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=8080410
"GOOD LUCK WITH THAT"
this is the first collab for Janice Hopkins & I,
lyrics are on the soundclick page


To Steven Rieck
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Steven,

Thanks for considering us, I listened to "Good Luck With That"
and thought it had some very clever and unique lyrics. I also enjoyed it's laid back feel and style.
I can certainly here beyond production,performance of a song in a demo and hear "the song" However I would never count on anybody else to. Not that it was bad, but the vocal was a bit too shaky and didn't aid in the songs appeal. Always try to get the best performance and sound available to you when submitting.
I apologize for seeming so direct but perception and first impression is huge in pretty much anything.

While there were great lines to this story, I never really caught an impact from it. This was probably mostly to do with the music overall, never really got deeply hooked in anywhere including the chorus. While the lyric was very well crafted it never really nailed the "yes I feel like that, or that happened to me" or gave the oh yeah" kind of response.
It may have been a bit too smart, if you can see what I mean, and all the clever lines didn't pay off by the chorus or by the end.

But still overall the final snag is the musical direction would not fair well with the current market.
I really can appreciate the crafting and work that went into this
though.

Thank you
Mr Knowitall
Sublevel Music NYC


Thanks!
Peace Mike
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