Dear Mr. Knowitall,

Thank you for taking time to listen to my last submission. I should have made it clear that I am not a performer and only hoped to learn whether the song was worth any more effort.

I was not going to go for three since that much rejection can start to wear on a person but decided that I've been through worse and have nothing to lose and everything to gain. Again, this is not a professional demo. I am submitting it to determine whether or not it is worthy of having a demo done.

Thanks for your time,

Ricki
(I figure by now we're on a first name basis)

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7005090

WHEN I WHISPER
McKeever, Williams & Bellos

When I whisper
My secrets to the wind
Do you hear them calling
As they start to roll in
Open your window
Let the night breeze rush through
Designed for pleasure
Delivered just to you

When I whisper
Softly and sweetly
I want so completely
To breathe you, seduce you
Slip into your dreams
When I whisper

When I whisper
My longing and desire
Can you feel it surging
The frenzy and fire
Go ahead reach out
Let promise fill the air
Close your eyes, listen
Though Im here and youre there

When I whisper
Free and easy
I dare you to tease me
Catch hold of me, please me
Youre just what I need

When you whisper back let me love you more than this
I begin to imagine the weight of your kiss

When I whisper
Do you know my intentions
When I whisper
Do I have your attention
When I whisper
When I whisper
When I whisper


http://www.soundclick.com/rickib
http://soundcloud.com/rickib
http://www.stoneybeachmusic.com/index.html

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