Dear Mr. Mike,
I appreciate greatly your advice on the last song, Take Me Like a Man.

If you have time, I would be honored to hear your comments for this song, it is a co-write with Ms. Denise Vrana (BubblingSoul) with her vocals. It is an acoustic. It tied for first place in a online contest a few months ago. We had alot of fun collaborating together. The rule for the contest was to use the words "Trampled Roses" in the lyric.
Please let me know what you think of this song. If it is too short? Ready for pitch as acoustic?
Thank you again,
Sincerely,
Kimberly Hales Kime
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7805475
Lyrics
Bedtime Stories and Lies Lyrics-Kime/Vrana
Vocals/Music-Vrana Guitar Warren Jurgens
V1
I know you think you have me with one little look,
And all the fairy tales you can fit in a book
You promise me the world with a white picket fence
But your sweet talk is nothing but pretend

CH
I've got trampled roses beneath my feet,
Cheap wine poured out in the sink
I've heard it all before from other guys
I dont buy anymore
And I won't fall for
Your bedtime stories and lies

V2 rise
You simply cant romance me with one little ring
Or convince me this is more than a summer fling
I am not foolish and surely not naive
You can keep your worthless, empty, cliched make-believe

CH

Bridge
I'm a woman made of flesh and bone
Not some two-bit princess,
I can make it on my own

CH


Tag-
I don't buy anymore
and I wont fall for
Your bedtime stories and lies

*Always open to collaborations on my lyrics.. with singers and musicians, but PLEASE contact me before putting work into one--in case someone else has it..thanks!!**
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