Hi Mike

This is a great production of a song - hands down QUALITY

Well no matter if Clive wanted your song or Not -- at the Time -- it HAD all the qualities and you know it - you need to be proud and confident that you can produce what the market wants - if given the opportunity...

and why some are given a chance and some are not is a BIG question -- in the industry and In Life --- is it all a matter of having all the right stuff and then Just having a wee bit of Luck to put it in the right place At the Right time ? Could be --

R & B is Still a Viable market -- I guess I would say -- keep pitching it ... you never know...

I had a couple of thoughts that could possibly make the lyric more contemporary and stronger and still fit the music. just my humble offering.... kos

jm


Leave Your Love WAR Behind © Caro/Paris
http://www.substudiomusic.com/LeaveYourLoveBehind .mp3

You know it's hard living everyday
When SOMEone(she sings this) you love takes theIR love away
And this love was one in million
He gave me everything he could have given

Now I got to face the facts HIS LOVE ain't (omit never) coming back
The time is right to get on with my life
You want (ed) me to(o) change but I'm gonna stay the same
And there's nothing you can say

I don't wanna talk about it'
I don't wanna think about
(omit-This time) I'm gonna leave your love WAR behind
I don't wanna change my ways
(omit- This time) I'm gonna leave your love WAR behind

You told me why you had to be alone
We have to try to make it on our own
With all my heart you are forgiven
I don't want you back, I just want to start living

I don't wanna talk about it
I don't wanna think about
(This time) I'm gonna leave your love WAR behind
I don't wanna change my ways
(This time) I'm gonna leave your love WAR behind

Solo

I don't wanna talk about it
I don't wanna think about
(This time) I'm gonna leave your love WAR behind
I don't wanna change my ways
(This time) I'm gonna leave your love WAR behind

I don't wanna talk about it
I don't wanna think about it
I don't wanna talk about it
I don't wanna think about it

Last edited by Joice Marie; 01/03/10 02:29 PM.
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