Al David
JPF Boards


Hi Alan

Thanks for the recent submission, I enjoyed this very much, it was well arranged,well performed and sounded good.
I here a TV theme in here possibly and a little Bond type of movie music as well. Definitely backing music and credit music as well.

I think to take it where it needs to hit that mark perhaps a little more repetition, also in that let those nice strings join the piano as well.. This does also make a good flat out instrumental to. Which doesn't have to be theme-ish.

I would suggest upgrading your drums library, get some more drum samples. These were a bit dated and hurt the appearance of the song some. Good programming and production ideas though.
Perhaps try to get your hands some hot new hip things too incorporate into your project as well as the very good traditional things your working with.

I would gladly accept this re-vised a bit or some other material for consideration from you based on this work and your abilities.

Look foward to hearing from you again
Mr Knowitall
Sublevel Music NYC

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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