Originally Posted by Bluesriff
http://www.myspace.com/folkinblues

Far Away

(c) Bluesriff Brown 2006

V1

feelin down,

kickin at

a coke can

on the ground

wondrin' why

your not still around

but its what i say

that sent you so

far away


where's my heart?

i know i had it
from the start
somehow it was
taken in
the dark
where i
use to pray

now its
so far
away

bridge

Outta sorts
outta touch
so far away
I dont see much
but scattered dreams
and pieces of the truth

my words are rough
eyes are mean
Ive seen more
than most men seen
thats why im so far
away from you



V3

where's my soul,
it wanders off
I cant say where
it goes
to a place, my
god only knows
gotta pray today

cause my soul's
so far away


V4

and I dream

a time before
my heart was cold
and mean
love was everywhere
or so it seemed

but not today

cause my heart is
so far
away

my soul has
drifted away

my love's
so far
away





Blues Riff Brown
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Hi,

Thanks for submitting "Far Away"

I thought the song had a good feel and nice solid playing.
Unfortunately we'll have to pass on it, Just not contemporary enough. The very best part was the soloing.
I would also suggest strengthening the demo's for future presentation, the voice on your songs are almost un-audible.

Thanks
Sincerely
Mr Knowitall
Sublevel Music NYC

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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