Originally Posted by Mark Kaufman
Well, how can I say No when Sub wants to come out and play? I'll give it a whirl. Here's a crappy recording of my offering. smile Hey, it's kinda fun to try to write just a snippet without having to worry about the whole song! I just tried to figure out some words that might fit, then I went kind of crazy adding vocal tracks. My dog is a little freaked out. This is my first time playing with Cubase, so sorry about the rotten EQ and mix. sick

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=759055&songID=6333196


Prechorus
You try so hard to hide what always shows
But I already know that you don't really want to go

Chorus
So why don't you stay?
(If only for the night)
Why don't you stay?
(It's gonna be all right)


Hi Mark!

Wow that was fast! You're gonna laugh but I think it's no surprise that your melody
and phrasing ideas are very close to mine. smile Of course I had something in my head
for this but wasn't set or certain. You felt the same things I did...

This was very good... It flowed and was catchy and that is the most important thing.

I like the backing vocals and the little add lib. We will keep on listening to see what others come up with and your always welcome to do more with it or change to make alternate versions... Nice work! The lyric reminded me of older cool Rasberry's love that stuff... may need to be slightly more edgier maybe... it was actually song nicely
with the harmonies and all..

But the pharsing was cool......

This is gonna be lots of fun!!!

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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