Mike:

Thanks for giving this a listen and for the detailed critique. I was actually expecting a shorter response: "Too sappy." About halfway through writing the song I thought: Crap, this is a girl's song...but I, like, couldn't stop myself.

I really enjoyed trying to write to your music. The riffs, groove, everything produced a lot melodic and lyric ideas (Yeah, I think I didn't pursue the right ones!) I love the way you layered in the guitars, and the way the acoustic guitar parts complement each other on the left and right sides. I listened to the music A LOT during this process and came to appreciate how well everything combined to produce a killer sound.

This is a great learning experience, Sub. I hope you do it again. I know this is taking up a TON of your time, and I'm sure everyone appreciates it.

Mark

(LOL @ A jewelry store is not the first image we want the listner to think of, unless we are robbing it)



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