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Your right Pete...but as I see it SUB is leading the pack and is looking for something specific and has even included his own lyric...if we were staff writers and the boss said I need__________then thats what the staff would write to...so that being said I'm using the opening lines that have been laid out as a sort of starting point and going from there... It is not that big of a deal...I look at this as an employer saying to a creative staff.."This is what I want.Here is the outline. Now go out and do what I pay you for."...All of it will wash out in the end if you believe Sub will be fair...And we must or we wouldn't be working for him...  So...with that... here is another shot using some of the stuff I already submitted and some of the stuff he said he likes or wants... You carved your name (v) You carved your name onto my heart Like an autograph Without fame or shame And I stared to laugh (v) Your friends said you were worth a shot The night when we met I thought you were Can you wait for one more set (Pre chorus) Hey girl, I’ve been looking For you Oh so long (chorus) Ah don’t Think twice We’ll go To paradise Where we’ll Share our life In a higher place (v) Came to see you on a weekend night My heart in hand Come out with me you’ll see I’m just one of the boys in the band (Pre chorus) Hey girl, I’ve been looking For you Oh so long (chorus) Ah don’t Think twice We’ll go To paradise Where we’ll Share our life In a higher place (bridge) All of my life has been a gamble I might get rich or live in shambles But I am sure to roam and ramble Can you handle this life Of staying out all night Tell me girl will it be alright (Pre chorus) Hey girl, I’ve been looking For you Oh so long (chorus) Ah don’t Think twice We’ll go To paradise Where we’ll Share our life In a higher place Pre chorus) Hey girl, I’ve been looking For you Oh so long (chorus) Ah don’t Think twice We’ll go To paradise Where we’ll Share our life In a higher place Copyright 2008 Ted Bryson
Last edited by Ted Bryson; 03/11/08 03:55 PM.
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