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Goldroom
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by Rob B. - 10/04/26 02:16 PM
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Hi Michele, I'm still a "learner" myself....I'll take a stab at your revised lyric....for my 2 cents opinion....LOL I like the sentiment "You got me know" cause what you described IMO wasn't you drive me crazy its "You caught my attention" You got me know....nice... also the word beautiful is descriptive, but maybe you could be more detailed about the persons eyes or mouth. I wouldn't put the same word in the next line though maybe one line beautiful the next line something else.... The chorus I would change the last line of "baby you drive me crazy" to something else, let the "You got me know" be emphasised (punched out) at the end of the chorus.... Michele its a pretty lyric....For what my opinion is worth I like it...  Keep going....I can't wait till the 19th.....
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