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I made a playlist in my I-Tunes of all the submissions. Now I can hear them instantly all in a row what a blast. Only Kathy I wasn't able to download yours.
I want to eventually post them all in a row on My Soundclick page.

As I listened straight through again I wanted to spit aout a few quick thoughts

Mark - That long holding notes were pretty cool at the end. Your slurrying/dipping style note on "stay" was effective had a coll " Cheap Trick" kinda vibe

Derek - Your voice in the pre-chorus especially is the cooliest voice sound fro the song so far. How Ironic after all those threads of picking on your vocals a bit and how they hurt the presenatation of your songs... remember? Oh yeah that's right
we don't pay much attention to you around here... BIG LOL and

How Ironic is all that lol....

Bob- Too sparse not enough meat on the hook but I'm thinking of throwing the whole contest in your favor cause I like you so much lol.... yes a fix!

Kevin E my main man Your song you posted you sang and had vocal chops & groove all the way... on this song it's like a completely different dude did it... Jeckle & Hyde effect lol... really still I appreciate it greatly bro!


Pete - The timing thing feels like most of what your doing is behind the beat to the point where it sounds late, Did you use a heavy echo effect when you did this?
The delay is too slow.... GREAT job on much of this melody..

Joice - I still love those dropped notes. Did I mention your voice is getting better & stronger... Still have to work your control some and pitch, but both have improved greatly in the time I've known you and your work.