Originally Posted by Jan Petter
Hi Sub and the rest of the gang smile I've been away from music making for awhile and this is my first attempt at this great rock song smile
Just verse and pre-chourus!!! I just sang what came to mind smile
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Keep up the good work, all you good people!!!!
This is so fun to be a part of smile
All the best
Jan Petter


Hey Jan

Great to see you here bro!

I loved your talking intro for sure smile You were the firt one to try the verse and pre
without the chorus how unique.

What I did relate to was your verse spacing approach was one of the closest to mine.
You shot off a line then let the guitar riff play in between. Tha's how i felt it as well.
Some of the others did that also...

I like your phrasing.... but it seems i really need this chorus most importantly.

Nice Fast Work & great to have you around!!



Thanks!
Peace Mike
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