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All righty here's my lyric. It goes to my other melody, but you'll have to sing it (I guess a girl could, but a guy is better). The COOL news is, I think you could work the final lines into your "Let's end the suffering" melody if you want. I tried to, but I'm still hearing my ending. I think the two melodies would blend though.

Okay now here is my OBVIOUS KILLER HOOK that I'm totally surprised NOBODY else thought of so far, and I mean DUH, we're all talking about it and nobody's calling it by name.
The title of the song is:
TATTOO

(lyrics by Adams/Caro/Bampfield etc etc)

You carved your name
Into my heart
Like an autograph
I did the same
Upon my arm
In ink that lasts
You burned with pain
Then faded fast

I don’t know what else I can do
Tried to show you

I’d love you forever
Now you say our love is all through
Tell me what
Do I do with this tattoo
You don’t want my flowers
You don’t want my letters
And I know I’ve done all I can do

What about this
Scar you left me
Incidentally
You can’t erase tattoos

I can’t erase
The memories
Like a robot mind
And I can’t replace
Your fading smile
Or lose this sign
Of our love
I got these lines

I don’t know what else I can do
Now I have this

Permanent reminder
Your name’s all I have left of you
Tell me what
Do I do with this tattoo
You left me with nothing
You don’t care I’m suffering
There’s so much I wish I could undo

What about this
Scar you left me
Incidentally
You can’t erase tattoos


Ta-DA!!!
Told ya it was cool.

Linda (AKA "Bernie")