Well, I worked on it, so I’ll post my ideas, but...It’s a good challenge for me ~ definitely working backwards here...I find it difficult to write a prechorus before I know what the verses say! (I see you now have ideas)...I read a few of your posts Sub, and it seems I’ve broken the love and want “rules” as well! Oh well! Always a good learning experience! smile

Ya know, I’m not sure I understand the music part of it...what was I listening to if that isn't the melody? I guess I should go read and listen to everybody’s posts now and see!

You say you’re ready to leave
I find that hard to believe

Maybe I’m crazy, I don’t know (but I know what I want)
Say you don’t love me, and I’ll go (but you won’t be able to)
Your eyes can not hide how you feel (it’s not wrong when it’s right)
Your kiss tells me this is real (don’t deny us that)

I want you and
You want me so
Why put up a fight
Am I crazy

Last edited by Kristi McKeever; 03/07/08 08:19 PM.
A musician must make music, an artist must paint, a poet must write,
if he is to be ultimately at peace with himself. What a man can be,
he must be. -- Abraham Maslow, American Psychologist