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Your right Pete...but as I see it SUB is leading the pack and is looking for something specific and has even included his own lyric...if we were staff writers and the boss said I need__________then thats what the staff would write to...so that being said I'm using the opening lines that have been laid out as a sort of starting point and going from there... It is not that big of a deal...I look at this as an employer saying to a creative staff.."This is what I want.Here is the outline. Now go out and do what I pay you for."...All of it will wash out in the end if you believe Sub will be fair...And we must or we wouldn't be working for him...  So...with that... here is another shot using some of the stuff I already submitted and some of the stuff he said he likes or wants... Ted- PERFECT explaination.. Thank you Thank you Think of it like a Taxi Submission.... Think of it as we are a label or Production Co. And we are staff writers.... Think Of it Like American Idol - do they not make comments to the the contestants as they go along, to try to help the singer and to reach there own goal.... Great & pro way to look at it Ted... and I'm glad I wasn't the nasty jerk Boss type Big lol... On your latest lyric submission, way way better, it's tighter at the top and slips away as the song progresses especailly in the verses. I would suggest trying to write only one or two verses and a chorus... or one killer verse, one killer pre-chorus one killer chorus instead of writing the whole song... Thanks Ted you are quite the sport as well.... pro attitude!
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