Mike,
I love most any idea to inspire me to write.
I've listened to your music last night and wrote the following lyrics. I haven't listened to your original verse and pre-chorus ideas yet. I will after I post these lyrics, it will be quite interesting for me to see if your ideas share, any the things your music spoke to me.
I hope these lyrics are a "it feels good fit" for you. I enjoyed the inspiration of your music.
Best of Luck,
Songdog

Our Love To Be

I couldn't say
That I would stay
Now she's gone
And gone away

This call to love
Will have to wait
I must be sure
I hesitate

Her memories
Are what I breathe
I second guessed
Our love to be

She told me please
One more time
Hearing her lies
Feels like I'm dying

Her memories
Are what I breathe
I second guessed
Our love to be

My love is crying
While life goes on
I wish we were
Meant to belong

Her memories
Are what I breathe
I second guessed
Our love to be

I wish I knew
This love was true
I could move on
Out of these blues


© 2008 Daniel Meehan
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