Originally Posted by Paul T Wentworth

Here's the song. That was definitely
not in my key as you will hear but I think I at least put the melody across
well enough. Maybe someone might be interested in singing the vocal again.

Regards....Paul

http://www.soundclick.com/share?songid=6356202


Good work Paul... I know how hard singing is...

Pretty good flow, and nice move on the pre-chorus
Some timing isues but nothing that can't be adjusted.

Biggest set back would be , not memorable enough. The hooks weren't strong enough.

Stii good work!


Thanks!
Peace Mike
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