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by Gary E. Andrews - 09/21/26 04:03 PM
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Hi Mike,
Hear Me!
Pre:: (4 seconds in)
Doesn't matter what I say
My words may fly away
Chorus: (9 seconds in)
Hear me - I'm call-ing
I'm fall-ing - your grace can't hold me
Hear me - I've lost out
I'm washed out - but pain can't hold me
So tear down - this corn-er
It's ov-er - no more pretending
Robert Carrick UK Hi Rob The pre-chous isn't awhat it needs to be but the chorus stuff wasn't bad. I like "I'm washed out" It would be better if it fell into a pttern like this Hear me I'm calling I'm washed out I've falling Tear down this corner ------- ----- Nice work!
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