Originally Posted by Robert Pickens
Mike....How neat is that....here's my lame entry....never was a lyric writer....anyway.....thanks for the fun.....hope you are well....Bob

Comes in around 18 seconds........intro....

Unknown(Not the title)
Caro/Pickens


I don’t know which way I’m going
My world has bee turned upside down
Will I ever find the way back one day
Or will I stay lost and never found

I’m never giving up
I’m never giving in
Never going to quit fighting….. for my life

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Het ya old Buddy! Glad you joined in.... Don't forget to feel free to pass this on to
Dennis as well.. ah! very cool smile

Okay - I LOVED the tag.. very in the pocket. Fit like a glove phrase wise.

The chorus was definitly feeling like a verse totally. If you could match your chorus with the same pop as that ending tag ... watch out!

I also liked the emotion and energy you were putting across all around.

Nice Job! U know I like you sooo much i may just give you the song and the whole
damn package smile


Thanks!
Peace Mike
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