I totally agree with Lyle about this process. This is an awesome songwriting workshop! Sub has devoted tons of time to not only giving general critiques of our songs, but giving specific advice on how to write for THIS project.

Hey, I wrote a song that was a swing and a miss, but based on his comments about my song (and all of your songs) I wrote another one that I'll post as soon as I can get B in front of the microphone. Maybe (probably!) it's another swing and a miss. So what? I'm just trying to learn how to write better songs and trying to get everything I can out of this opportunity.

Derek, for the record I think you wrote some great stuff forthis contest. I think Sub is judging our work based not only on quality, but on how closely it matches what he is looking for.

Mark

"In theory, theory and practice are the same. In practice, they are not."
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