Originally Posted by Derek Hines
Hi Mike decided to have some fun with it this time. I know this isn't what you're probably looking for, but maybe you'll get some enjoyment out of it as well. I know I did.
Derek

1st verse
I placed your name in ink on my arm
As the image faded you cut out my heart

Pre-chorus
Left the door open and away you flew
Didn’t take you long to find somebody new


Chorus
I don’t know how long this can last
Watching you slam that door
Trying to forget the pain
As my life drains on the floor

Extra Tag
So I’ll just slip away
Let me go down easy

(Fun hook lyric before next verse)
Let me go down, easy Let me go down easy

2nd Verse
My jealousy fumes, then explodes in rage
At the end of the chapter you’re on a different page


2nd pre-chorus
Should I try to hold on or should I go
Feels like I’m losing the plot and it’s the end of the show

(during final singing of the chorus two part harmony sings "Let me go down easy, let me go down twice then end tag)

Chorus
I don’t know how long this can last
Watching you slam that door
Trying to forget the pain
As my life drains on the floor

End tag

Turn your face away from me
Let me go down easy



Go down easy



Hi Derek

The lyrics didn't quite match the mp3 on this post...
But I still got the jest of it.....

It's just getting better and better, much more flow and nothing was sticking out and distracting me. That's a big key... You want people to hear the song the first time and have it feel like they have heard a hunderd times before (in a way)

Your opening chorus melody on the first line or two is still near the top of the heap.

I'm glad you are enjoying this post, it seems we all are that makes me happy as that is the most important thing to me, well after making a killer tune that is smile lol...

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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