Originally Posted by Mark Kaufman
I can't let my idea go until it's heard in context... smile

I'm sick today, and when I woke up there was really no voice...just a bunch of croaking. But I kept pushing until it started to work again...but I don't really sound like me.

Whatever, here it is.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=759055&songID=6355264

Sweet Stranger

So how did you find this place, sweet stranger?
Were you tempted by the face of danger?

You can try to hide your passion, but it shows
And you can walk away, but the moment comes and goes

So run with me now, sweet stranger
(It's gonna be all right)
Take my hand and take a chance on love
(If only for the night)
I'd give my life to you right now
Can you believe in me somehow
And run with me now, sweet stranger
(It's gonna be all right)

There's a tiger in your eyes, sweet stranger
And would you be surprised if I tamed her?

There's a reason why you came to me today
Yes, it seems to me that tiger wants to play

So run with me now, sweet stranger
(If only for the night)
So glad you came
Now tell me, what's your name?
(It's gonna be all right)
I'd give my life to you right now
If you'll believe in me somehow
And run with me now, sweet stranger
(If only for the night)


Hi Mark

Another Good song bro!!!

Very thorough and great use of combinations from the best of both drafts and songs.

This whole approach was something I like very much personally. It had an almost
a classic EAGLES vibe to it... how cool... Between the many harmonies (great job by the way) the lift on the "alright" part was pretty amazing.
And those guitar licks, gave that Eagles vibe, like "Victim Of Love" or few other classics. Even the verses had a Henley like vibe as does the lyrics, so ya know I love that!! The Eagles were truly GREAT...

I had some thoughts to write about this when Tripp my wife came in th room and said is "That's the same guy who sent "Why don't you, Why don't you"....right?

I said yes it is... She said I thought so... Right there I knew the similar hook but that songs lyric approach was easy to remember she did from 4 days ago.

She said yes the first song was easier to remember. smile

The whole thing has flow. it's smoothe and never really awkward.
I think it makes a great alternate song idea.
Still your first one was edgier and that is the goal of the song (I think) lol...

Mark - GREAT work overall really, you were already at the top of the heap as it was..

Ruby says Hi! as well smile



Thanks!
Peace Mike
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