Originally Posted by Kevin Emmrich
Here's my concept take. I just couldn't hit the melody that I had in my head, but I gave it the best shot I could. It's obvious I won't be the singer for this one!

MP3: http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6334317

Kevin

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Somehow, Someday
(c) Caro/Emmrich 2008

(pre-chorus)
:01 Hey, Look at me
:09 It's about us, can't you see ....

(Chorus)
:17 (that) Somehow we will make it through
:26 Someday you will call me and say
:34 (that) Somehow I made it up to you
:44 Someday we'll remember this day

(outro/ending)
:52 But it won't make any difference
:57 If you're not with me
:59 Somehow, Someday

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Edit: Oops, the times are from the original track, I slid everything over a little when I mixed it to an MP3.


Hi Kevin

Yes I agree you probably won't be the singer smile on this one ....

Thanks for putting up the time numbers as well, I meant to do that.

Your take on the song: Not bad the pitchy vocal of course is gonna hurt it but of course I can hear past that. The biggest problem with this is the timing & phrasing.
The melody is decent but it's swimming a little, notes are too short too long not enough syllables too many for one spot. It has an awkward way about it.

* One of the big keys here is : If you have a great flow or meter, just a catchy melody the words become less and less important. Not that they aren't important but you should not even notice them or think twice about them on the first listen..

This is how Rock Bands and certain artists get RICH & FAMOUS right before our eyes and ears smile


Oh yes I love that song, Wow is that what he is singing there ???


Thanks!
Peace Mike
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