Hi Nathan,

Thanks for posting these.
Good stuff here for sure, Of course I would love to hear as you imagined them fitting the track. These lyrics remined me of Ted's slightly in that they were a bit more obscure and less personal. I liked the chorus the best. I love vague songs the most but I still like something that will touch somone personally then keep it vague as well.
This one lacks noticable feelings.

Good Job & thanks for contributing this.


Thanks!
Peace Mike
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