Pete: I have to say that your is one of the top 5 in that the melody of the chorus has got a lot of heart and feels like it was made for the changes and arrangement.

But then the lyrics shine also. Lots of cool and interesting lines phrases and they all seem to flow almost seamlessly into each other.

I know its a friendly competition here. Your song is driving me to try and get mine up to that same level at least in the chorus.

This is exciting. Do I need a life here or what?

Regards...Paul