Originally Posted by Derek Hines
Hey Sub

What a neat idea. Mine is rather simplistic lyric wise, but it was fun to try. I kinda let the prechorus be like an intro to the chorus and left it wordless. My singing is probably not the best so if you like the lyric melody or both feel free to bring in a different singer. Well here it goes.

Chorus
I don’t know how long this can last
Or how far we will go
I only know when I’m with you
That time just seems to slow

Tag
Waitin for you one day
to be mine forever


Time just seems to slow


Hi Derek! Thanks....

Don't worry eventually no matter were this song ends up there will be a singer brought in. You sounded a bit like Ozzy on this COOL smile

I gotta tell ya, you guys are putting smiles on my face. Derek that was very catchy
the opening line especially. I though your chorus melody was very good.

Two people impressed me so far smile The lyric on this is gonna be tough of course
not a whole lotta space so to speak to get alot of info in. That's part of the challenge.

That's what makes it so different than most Country songs you seem to have all the time in the world to tell a story. This song flys by you pretty quick and the tempo isn't even that fast...

You have a good melody and phrasing going on here, the lyric is not quite it.. but that's totally cool. You can always work on that, if you have a great melody your lyrics will NEVER sound awkward, forced or unflowing to the listener

Nice Job! Derek smile

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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