Sub, thanks again for running this contest. This has been a great experience.

Here's my second try. I used your verse and pre-chorus, but I had to write a different opening verse to set up the "hook."

Tear Your Hooks Out Of My Heart

©2008 Mike Caro/Mark Schuessler
Vocals: Brandon Rounds

VERSE1
You had the looks, pulled me in, that was your design
Then you sunk your hooks through my skin, caught me on a line

LIFT1
Why do I miss you when you're gone?
Because when I'm with you I know this is so wrong...

CHORUS
Tear your hooks out of my heart
Time to let the bleeding start
It's worse when we're together than when we're apart
Tear your hooks out of my heart

TAG
It's an emergency
Lets end this suffering
Goodbye!

VERSE2
You carved your name in my heart like an autograph
Then you did the same on your arm, but the ink fades fast

LIFT2
Maybe it's time I let you go
What you did to me and our love it was so cold...

REPEAT CHORUS

REPEAT TAG

"In theory, theory and practice are the same. In practice, they are not."
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