Hi my dear friend Mike,

I hope you are feeling better soon sick , I am a bit lost at the moment, my right arms been cut off, cause my dear friend Mike is sick and your not here, and now my right arms been cut off, cause my cute hubby has been sick as well sick. I'm shattered. frown Any way I thought I would still post what I have, it's not finished yet, and it won't be by the 19th, but that's okay, I will keep working on it any way.

Please remember,I am on my LEARNERS with song writing, so I did some changes, and I just wanted to know, is it better, or worse.

You Rock My World!(Baby,you drive me crazy)

Verse

The first time I saw you, my heart just stopped
My eyes, could see, it's only you that I want
Your beautiful eyes, that matches your looks
Your beautiful smile, that's (you've) got me (I am now )hooked


Chorus 1

Baby, you drive me crazy, you've (you) got me now
When, your lips touch(es) mine, ohh............
Baby, your driving me crazy, you've (you) got me now
When, your body touches mine ohh..............
Baby, you drive me crazy, you've (you) got me now

Copyrighted March 2008


Thanks a bunch


YOUR AUSSIE FRIEND wink

Michele




Last edited by Michele Bolton; 03/18/08 03:46 AM.