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HiAgain, Sub!
SO..Amigo...What Concept for the Verses wouldya like, Amigo! (I hadda make up the Verse Head-Melody, of course...& Chorus is (Alas) SO-Wordy, I instinctivly feel The Need for REAL Short Verse-Lines.
"Day-to-Day Drudgery" SEEMED to be a Realistic "Springboard" for the Inspirational Chorus there, which certainly Fed Offa your Fine Chorus Melody.
IF ya feed us a VERSE Melody..(& a maybe Hint of what's desired IN those Verses)..I'll betcha I can Nail This Sucker..heh-heh!
Thanks Again for a Fun Challenge, Amigo!
Best Wishes/Big Guy-Hug,
Ol' Stan Hi Stan Hurt, slightly angry maybe searching, a little desperation..... I put up an extended version and some verse lyric idea.... to play off of. Yes very short verses two lines actually....
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