Hi Linda

That was wild girl... at first it had a Robert Plant like vibe to it, then it had a Freddie like vibe to it... all favorites of mine.

The absolute best part was this:
Cop is here
He's got his gun

This melody/phrasing is where the verses should have stayed, you got away with from this way too fast and started wailing in all different directions.

Some of the more elaborate ideas had potential but your pitch, pitch, pitch, I keep haunting you about in all posts smile When I stop caring about you I will say
GREAT vocals LInda take care!!! Untill then I will haunt you smile

You went clear out of the songs key smile However you also were thorough going from start to finish. And I know you were having fun and stated you were taking a light hearted approach.. but I still think you can focus more on the melody of the song
and be right up there in the game...

Great energy and spunk! you are welcome to jam with the band anytime!

Thanks!
Peace Mike
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