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Lot Long
by Gary E. Andrews - 11/10/26 11:20 AM
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Joined: Apr 2005
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Ok, this is why niteshift has permanantly banned himself from being in front of a microphone.....lol...... Chorus only..... I need you, you feed me I breathe you in I need you to believe me Wrap your arms around my skin I need you, you feed me Let me in I need you to believe me Wrap yourself around my skin http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=704874&songID=6356308cheers, niteshift Hi Nite I'm so happy you realized and joined us... This was a pretty good Chorus, the bibe of the words were close, but would need to be a little more effective, but mostly the melody was in the pocket which is key. It was slightly similar with some of the others as well as ones in my head.. That is what Mark was trying to explain we are gonna cross over each others pharsing even if we dont listen to anyones ideas, chord changes do that  This one can use a little more in the main hook, can't put my finger on it but your close.... Good work bro!
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