Well I'm pretty much gased out crazy...not sure if you like the melody and not the lyric...or part of the lyric and not the melody...so if you need some more ideas please ya gotta direct me...if you have it pretty much down what you want I don't want to make you read all my stuff...and thats cool...but if you kind of already know where this heading I'm willing to call it good ole try! grin crazy...in any event this is pushing writers to come up with their very best ...and that is a good thing...Cheers!!and Peace!!

On the way out...

Slice my way away from you
Run or stay not going to play
A foolish heart broken game
Who's to blame for this bloody name



Last edited by Ted Bryson; 03/14/08 06:38 PM.