JPF Home Page Forums Lyric and MP3 Feedback MP3 Feedback Forum The Rock Idol Song Forum Contest

Hi Gang

Okay, I haven't listened to anything since my last post yet. It's so crazy last week i was feeling so much better than since Saturday I've been sliding down hill. I did book an X-Ray for Monday for my neck. WHATEVER! I'm sick of doctors & of being sick.

So after I pushed myself this week through 4 sessions in a row what do you think I did on my night off?? Of Course!

1- I worked on the lyrics to that Country Novelty Song Co-write I was talking about. Then I sang the choruses to it as well, had fun layering like 5 part harmonies on the chorus. My co-writer hasn't heard anything from me yet he is gonna freak when he gets this. I'm busting butt on the lyrics...very funny, a little at a time.

2- Then I added my original verse & pre-chorus ideas to our Rock Song I had a chorus from way back as well but I didn't want to add it and throw anyone off what they are doing, besides I don't feel 100% certain of my chorus ideas.

3- I also started editing all your versions choruses together into one big mp3

The lyrics are very close, but I mumble some stuff purposely as to nail the best melody and phrases. I dont want my words to throw that off.

Singing is the second to last least best thing I do, of all the things I do. Piano is last.
So bare with me .... besides being melodic I love to be rthymical in everything I do
So I took that approach to the verses instinctively....everything below was from when I first started the song

[b(]Untitled Rock Song) [/b] with Original verse & pre-chorus melodies/basic lyric
http://soundclick.com/share?songid=6363461

[b]You carved your name in my heart like an autograph
Then you did the same on your arm, but the ink fades fast

Maybe it's time I let you go
(mumbled stuff) What you did to me and our love
It was so cold....etc......

(Chorus)

Tag:
It's an emergency
Lets end this suffering
Goodbye!

I added this link to the first page first post as well.....