Hi Mike

Thanks for your reply, Yeah, it is definitely a nice flowing rock song, that we are getting from your music. But that's okay, if we get a great song out of this challenge, I understand now, that it isn't what you are looking for, but that's okay, I am having the best fun.

The chorus does flow nicely, the verse needs some work as to the line you mentioned, and you are right. These two lines, I just put there for the time being, that's how I song write, I try to get the structure, put them in, take them out.

These two lines, I just through in there!

Your beautiful smile, your strawberry red hair
Those cute little freckles, that match your hair

I would like my songs to be universal, not everyone has red hair and freckles, so yeah I agree with you, I am fascinated that you picked up on one of the lines, that I just through in there!

Thanks so much, I will keep working on it any way, it's good fun, and it will be a great song for my album.

Michele
Aussie girl from down under

http://www.myspace.com/michelebolton

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